All Comments on 'This is How We Change the World Ch. 04'

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NoLongerAnonNoLongerAnon11 months ago

This story just gets better and better.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I love your work

MigbirdMigbird11 months ago

Captivated by their struggle both within (for both) and between. Hesitate to pick out a given line/moment that resonated more than others, so will not suffice it to say I reflected maybe more on “Lyric had a long and complicated relationship with pretending.” Maybe me simply trying to understand/connect, but paused for a moment. Thanks for creating this storyline and characters.

daiblo598daiblo59810 months ago

excellent series I love it and you raised a lot of things I never really thought about. Thank you.

Terraformer57Terraformer5710 months ago

Remarkable and how relevant to these troubled times....

Bravo on a wonderfully relevant story....and particularly this chapter.

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This is a collaboration account for the stories coauthored by AwkwardMD and Omenainen. In addition to finishing our third major work, Epilogue, our next short story is live! Check out The Most Mysterious Song on Literotica!! To check out our individual stories go here Awkwa...