All Comments on 'Thornbush Academy'

A fun and creative update on "The Story of O"--moved from France to England, and with less whipping, more exhibitionism, and a smidgin of mind control. The story reminds me of my own first day as a professor--except there were only 10 or 11 girls in a class (and as many boys), everyone had pubic hair, and nobody except professional go-go dancers wore thongs. Obviously, that was some time ago. But it's nice to learn (courtesy of this story) that the essentials never change.

Interesting concept, plenty of cliches but they work because they’re classic. I almost quit part way through this, for the sole reason that the father’s of the girls were present. Even mild hints at incest or traits similar are something I find nauseating, so for me that’s just a whole world of NO.

I’m planning on reading more and hoping it doesn’t go down that route. It’s your story so naturally your call. Very well written, thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

Looking forward to the next chapters. It appears that the girls are eager to learn and are not forced to participate. Just shy and inexperienced. We'll see about that.