All Comments on 'Three Coins in the Fountain Pt. 03'

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Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 1 year ago

Zzz - rinse and repeat. 4*

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 1 year ago
" How willing you are or were to please me makes me want to give myself to you "

A bliss point of unencumbered, love and totally devotion that only parent/offspring can share ( siblings close second). The use of "Nivara like bliss" allows the reader to actually feel the love transmigratng from mother to son.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A relationship like Tom and Jeannie can be most wonderful. No one will love either one more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Absolutely fantastic, he needs to go to part 4 and possibly 5 to finish it out.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Needs more another chapter!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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