All Comments on 'Three Days at the Lake House Pt. 01'

Great setup

Part two is going to be published tomorrow, October 20th. And you’re not going to want to miss that one. Trust me ☀️

Super excited about all the possibilities in future stories, hoping when steven shows up his friends are going to town on his sweet mommy and he joins in for a mommy gangbang!

Oh Ms. Beaumont are you trying to seduce me, Haha!

Stephan and Victoria sexual tension chemistry screams titular" Taboo" vibes and Stephan's dream about his mom might be coming true sooner than he thinks. while Stephan proves he's the real "man" of the house rather than his cheating father in "Three Days at the Lake House" with mom and friends.

Including some Stacy's mom got going on song in the background for Ms., Beaumont,

With Ms. Beaumont cutting loose and being the Party girl for the extravagant 3-day weekend.

What happens at the Lake house, Stays at the Lake Hehe?

My speculation guesses

Continue on

Cheers!

A promising start. So many ways to go.

As a bit of advice to a beginning writer: Take it easy on the over abundant exposition. Can’t some of that roll out as the action of the tale develops? The ruminating introspection of Victoria’s deep thoughts do not move a story forward. Stories are about action - not thought.

Can’t wait for more.

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Fantastic story!!!

I like where this going.

As an avid reader of mutually consensual incestuous love stories, I look for stories that provide indepth character development, logical plot development, seamless subplot intergration, and physically practical sexual activity. I do not care for gratuitous sex. So far, this is an outstanding story which has been rated 5 stars via reasonable doubt.

A well designed scenario and the story does not rush. Nice pace.