All Comments on 'Threesome (Pathfinder Inspired)'

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PornoclesPornocles8 days ago

A few grammatical errors but the missed potential was worse. Almost no attempt was made to describe any of the characters or their environment. The logistical issues of two normal height people fucking a person half their height were also completely overlooked. And why would a tavern have rooms with a kitchenette? It’s not AirBnB.

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