All Comments on 'Throat Baby'

Good premise.

But rushed. Very rushed.

It's more of a list of sexual activities than a story including them.

Sex is too automatic. Too mechanical. No trepidation at all.

Needs many, many more details. Step-by-step details.

Needs dialog. About each other's bodies. About how they look.

Have you ever seen a cock before? Would you like to see mine? Would you like to touch it?

Your breasts/tits/boobs look great. May I see them? They're beautiful. Are they sensitive?

And so on...

Three stars.