All Comments on 'Through the Window'

by Humpdee84

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tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
hot and funny

Lucky guy, guess he will never forget that night.. Hope she had fun on her date..

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
you have to wonder

If she treats all her blind dates like that.

And with all those names, we still don't know hers. lol

Humpdee84Humpdee84over 9 years agoAuthor
Glad you asked about the name.

When I first wrote this story about 10 years ago I didn't use any names until the end. I've gotten some feedback that there should be names. I added STEVE at the beginning and then forgot it had ended as ED. Thanks for point out that error.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Who's Ed?

Good story, but why did his name change?

WatcherRobWatcherRobover 9 years ago
Hot

Good story. Kinda wonder who Frank is? Why didn't she know she was fucking the "wrong" guy. Hope he used a condom.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Funny

Very funny

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