by CharlieSaint
Really liked but … . The two women characters well developed and the sex sensually erotic — well crafted/easily visualized/felt. Josh more like a foil which is fine within storyline, though the closing seems rushed/pieces telegraphed. Maybe more to follow as last line suggests, but all the suspense/intrigue/erotic moments dissipated in just a couple of paragraphs. Do hope you continue to share whether more within this storyline or something new — lots of potential.
Looking forward to when Josh finds out his wife is in love, just not with him.
Ah, the old babysitter and parent trysts. But I do love the babysitter and mom aspect better than babysitter and dad. So sexy.
I love babysitter twist, with mom instead of dad. will Pippa and Zoe stay together or will she try another, or several more ladies? Will she just become a co-ed plaything being past around like the traveling pants? Hope you continue this and tell us what is in your fantasy.
I like Migbird's comment. To me it absolutely needs a further chapter or two or three. It is a well written set up for at least two interesting plotlines: the lesbian relationship, or is it a double bi and in the end casual, and the married couple. Will they both continue, neither or just one, and how is everyone, incl thhe daughtr, going to cope? Potentially a set of 5 star stories, at pdresent a 4 star snippet.