All Comments on 'Tickets to Paradise Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Where the Fuck is the Husband

You can move this anywhere you want but you still have a slut cucking her husband. Thius still sucks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Why does this story contain a woman that does not even think about her husband, at any point in the story? her husband might as well be dead. The really is no point in this woman being married. So why has the writer written a story about a non loving slut woman who happens to be married? why not just make her a single white trash woman?

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 12 years ago
AW for crap sake!

It's a story and a hot one at that. Read it for what it is. I liked it.

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