All Comments on 'Tied in a Tent by the River'

Interesting premise.

Generally well told.

But don't understand how the sock she gagged him with was so clean, but her pussy wasn't. She wasjes laundty, not not her body?

Too little time spent on the sex.

And not nearly enough details.

She made him cum much too fast. Needed many more details about exactly how she jerked him. And his reactions to that. And even though she was going to force him to cum, why not edge him and force him to beg to be llowed to cum? And this scene needed dialog during it.

His pussy eating also needed many more details. And perhaps better if he wasn't so adept at it and needed instruction/s abiout how she wanted him to him to use hil lips and tongue.

Four stars.

Please write more! Already hooked to the story

Great story. I hope you continue it.

Love the story! Please write a continuation of this please.

I thought it was excellent. Very imaginative narrative, well told. To Anonymous, who commented 8 days ago, with his multitude of suggestions, I say, Perhaps you should be writing stories yourself, rather than anonymously critiquing other's writing.

A truly beautiful and arousing story, incredibly well-written, for its complexity and given the overlay of its themes. Thank you!!!

Fascinating story! Great characterisation, and a truly compelling sense of suspense from scene to scene. Very well written too...I look forward to reading the next chapters of what looks like an excellent series. I have written a homelessness themed story too... there's just something so raunchy and prurient and wrong about the whole idea...I love it! Thanks for a wonderful read! 5 stars 🤩

Excellent!

I loved it! This story brought back some amazing feelings about when i visited a woman in Virginia and from the minute that I walked into her house, i was wondering if i would ever come out alive, if I would come out sexually satisfied, my fetishes sated for a few minutes or just feeling really dirty and violated. It ended up being the latter two options but has always left me wishing that I would have stayed in that house much longer.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Normally I 'm put off by anything remotely non-consensual, but this was great fun. Well done!

I like that it can stand on its own as a complete story, but as the start of a series it could probably have done with a bit more of a cliffhanger or a teaser about what's coming next.

Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated!

love the sock gag and the finger in the ass owned