All Comments on 'Tiff - Notes of a Submissive Whore'

Great story for your first attempt! Looking forward to part 2

A good story with a good beginning.

Well done Tiffany ;--)

So, is this HER fantasy or her husbands as well? Meeting at their home is a bit of a risk. Neighbours notice things!!

There is interest for more, you can be sure of that.

I liked the quick background and right into the start. The whole worked smoothly.

Like it - like the style - easy to read and like the dark humour. Eager to see how it develops.

Bring on part2. it is such a good girl!! Very well told part 1. it now knows that it’s a whore, and that it’s holes are what it’s men customers really want. Customer#2 brings a little more. Keep spilling! Lots more to share.

Quit a preamble ,was hoping for a little more BDSM .Overall enjoyed the story

Thank you. Part 2 will come in a couple of weeks x

LenardSpencer: it’s about being careful, high fences and taking a few risks, yes

A really good read, felt very personal and real, an excellent start to your series. I will be following with interest.

Not bad for a whore, not bad at all honey

Well written good build up explanation and background Cant wait for part 2 and any subsequent stories. I also follow you on fet

I love how you set the tone and the contrast, seamlessly going from desk worker to whore and (hopefully in part 2) to submissive slave.

In each role you are serving others, you are on somebody else's clock, your pleasure is no longer a priority. You are not even yourself anymore, you are Tiffany the slut.

Keep writing.

You’re writing skills are pretty good for just starting this. Keep it up.

All of its stories got moved to BDSM category. Did it do that?

Yes, I was advised to move them to BDSM in the forums

I look forward to more action by Tiffany in coming chapters.