All Comments on 'Time Flies Ch. 04'

This one went over my head. I just could not stay on target for this story andd the few times I did lock on the puzzle wouldn't form. I am very much looking forward to the next story, the build up is very nice. Someone going on vacation? Thanks for this WW!

This is awesome. This time the waiting is going to be the longest than usual. I was anticipating this. Something very personal hsd to be happening to IC. Great start I'd say rather for upcoming events.

lol Cindy took down the perp before we finish reading the line....nice one.... waiting for the next story when it's done for I believe it will be a roller coaster...thankyou Ww God bless you...and pray you or I don't die befor this saga is done

Did not see Merkle as dirty, but great writing.

I guess the remaining secret info hiding in that old wine cellar will be moving to BOW Enterprises Corporate HQ, the Vision HQ or Todd & Teresa's home. Or all three, first Todd & Teresa's home, then Bow and then the Vision's HQ. So when the Feds come to break into Crowbar's Cabin to get him on concealing info from the Feds, they will come up empty handed. Maye even that info will be leaving for Japan for awhile or at least to a Japanese embassy.

Of course, a storage spot in the garage under some shelving units could also be a good location to temporarily hide such information.

I hope it comes soon. This build up is killing me.......

I thought that the solution was going to turn away from drugs and become theft of intellectual property from the university to foriegn powers.

On no, I just gave you a free story idea.

Next chapter, we find out if another main character turns on our heros.

Man your stories are good you could write for tv or movie????

Why hasn't Cindy's dad helped her resolve the issue with Don? Doesn't say make sense to keep dragging it out or revealing Cindy as the media mole because she was never fully deactivated by her father.

Will probably catch Cindy flat footed and really, really piss off the Iron Wolf (*cring*). And I think Martin Nash is up for an original crowbar beatdown!

Thanks for the kind comments. This chapter was my 500th submission to be published, and I appreciate the loyal following and good comments and votes over the years.

tranzmany - I can understand the puzzle not forming. I don't think I did the best job of explaining the solution, and there indeed lots of moving parts.

bedspread02 - I've been outlining a story very similar to your intellectual property idea, so we'll see what happens there.

And some of your predictions are fairly spot-on, while others are not so much. I'm writing the next story now, and it's a 'biggie', so I'm making sure I get it right and all the ducks in a row, so your patience is appreciated...

Seems like the swamp has been waiting for Amber to have her baby.

Do we know who the baby's father is?

Have I just missed it somewhere?

Thought I had posted this comment last chapter but it apparently didn’t “stick.”

As soon as I heard the DEA Agent’s name - Fred Merkle - I wondered if his nickname was “Bonehead” or maybe if he was the grandson of the old time New York Giants First Baseman?...Regardless, it looks like he made a similar “Bonehead” play... Great story, as usual, WW. I’d say “keep up the good work” but that’s a given...

Thanks

rick

and trying to blow the man down, by closing the safe doors. TK U MLJ LV NV

With all our wildfires here we will Roast those Swamp Frogs like marshmallows till they pop ... The Angels, along with some vibes help from Carol, will be ready to help Don

The next story, 'No Way Out', has been submitted and hopefully will be published soon.

Another excellent story but what an ending. I really need to know how DA Walters, Dr Robin Isle and Martin Nash turn out; surely they all cannot be bad.

*****Interesting closing great opening mystery! Thanks for sharing.