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rgraham666rgraham666about 18 years ago
Nice one

The build up was very well done. The authour described the changes the narrator went through very well.

This created a tension that drew me into the story.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
A beutiful story

I enjoyed its build up to a fine climax. Author new how to handle the characters like Jillian. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Damn scary!

Nightmare time?

S9808S9808about 1 year ago

impressive stuff. drawn in like a moth to a candle.

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