All Comments on 'Time Stop Inheritance Ch. 07'

Thanks for the story. I kinda hoped he would tell Marian about the watch and see where things would go with both of them in stopped time. It would be interesting to see how sweet Marian devolved into debauchery like we watched sweet Tom devolve. That story line would have probably lead to a much darker ending, All that said, the story went where your creative juices took it, and that is all we as audience can ask for. Thanks again and I hope to see something new from you soon. Keep writing!

Do post your alternate ending