All Comments on 'Time to Add Something Interesting'

by Borzoibrace

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
YOU NEED AN EDITOR

...Text somewhat confusing - bad grammar and, well, just confusing...

BorzoibraceBorzoibraceover 4 years agoAuthor
to anonymous

I am laughing...you don't even sign your comment. Would it surprise you to know I have five published well received mystery novels? The one who does not know grammar and is easily confused is you. A bit over your simplistic head I'd say.

pdhornepdhorneabout 4 years ago

Sex stories are always stimulating. However, this is a terrible read with constant changes from first person to third person and run-on sentences that cover way too much ground. Rated poor and unfollowed the author.

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