All Comments on 'Time Travel Machine Ch. 02'

There is an issue with the Mom's age. At the beginning of the story you say she is 37, but she becomes 44 just 9 months later.

It’s a typo. My editor and I both missed it. She’s 38 when she has the baby.

Off to a fantastic start. It would be exciting to let dad watch as this loving son has mom dressed up in her sexiest lingerie and the son is pounding away like a mad man. As the mother goes orgasm to orgasm and begs her son to breed his mommy. Dad can shoot his load in his hand as his son fills his mothers pussy over and over until mommy’s belly swells again. so many possibilities

Nice story. loved how he takes revenge on his abusive parents. hope you continue writing it, maybe something with the dad and the daughter fucking each other. Cuz, that makes me hot.

When will the new chapter approximately be released?

Not sure . I’ve been busy.

Still busy? I hope you didn't forget the story (:

Afraid so .

Why would you force the siblings to be involved with an incestuous relationship,I get the revenge in the parents but not the siblings.

It's not really forcing, plus it's just a fantasy. I don't see the problem

It’s just a fantasy. And the siblings were part of the problem too.

Is there still being worked on the follow up?

I don't mind the author taking his time, but still ...

You said the siblings are part of the problem too.they were only infected by the way they saw his parents treat him. They are not going to be the same if he's changed the parents.

Wasn’t too bad I suppose but you let down this storyline by not giving any descriptions or details on this siblings and how they reacted to him fucking their mum.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Aussie1951, I may rewrite this.

Aussie1951 , I may rewrite this. And they are under a mind control device .

Good idea