All Comments on 'Time Traveler Ch. 03'

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TSreaderTSreaderover 4 years ago
A lovely chapter!

Very well done! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
From Anonymous-E

Read all 3 chapters and liked the story. Are there more chapters after this one? As for the grandmother having her grandson/lover's hand on her stomach, I'm guessing big that she gets pregnant by him in the past. Will see in the next chapter... Hopefully.

AdultCartoonsAdultCartoonsover 4 years agoAuthor
more chapters are coming

for those asking, yes there are plenty more chapter after this one

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
Absolutely amazing

So well written. Sequencing was perfect. The way everything fell in place as grandma explained.

I may add, very erotic. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
It's so erotic. Love it but why so short chapter

It's lovely and erotic. But plz write longer chapter. It feels so short. And yes my guess is also that she will get pregnant by her grandson.

HragsHragsover 4 years ago
I wish there was really was a time machine. I would fall in love with my mother. She passed away my 2018.

Well...what can i say !!!!

ratimomratimomover 4 years ago

Nice surprise in this part that his grandmother already knows that he is her lover from last 20 years. Rated 5*

ratimomratimomover 4 years ago

Very nice surprise. Dorothy already knows that her grandson is the man as lover with her from last 20 years. Rated 5*.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Anonymous-E

Hope you hurry on the next chapter because I want to read more the Grandson and Grandmother (younger self) getting more lovely and her possible pregnancy by her future grandson.

juanviejojuanviejoover 2 years ago

Loved it...5 Stars!

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