All Comments on 'Timestopper Begins Ch. 40'

So some drive-by shooter slaps a 1-star rating on this, without even leaving a comment. That's even worse than the Anonymous trolls.

So ... 5 stars.

Said "drive by shooter" simply didn't like the story and felt no need to explain themselves or listen to all the hateful rebuttals and just gave a rating and left it at that. Personally, when I find a story so repugnant it only warrants one star, I often do so without commenting. No rule says commenting or even rating is required, so climb down off your high horse bucko, not everyone feels the need to subscribe to your rules for how to conduct themselves.

Personally I'm not of the opinion the story is one star material, but after 40 chapters it's boring enough that I think a solid three is warranted.

Just the same things happening in every episode

Highly enjoy your series, look forward to the next installment. Keep up the good work.

Please write more timestopper stories! I would love to see him go back to the college showers.

Disregard what everyone else is saying; this is by far the best and my favorite series on this site, which I have been coming back to every week for going on three years now. If you’ve lost inspiration for it, that’s fine, but there are still some loose ends and characters to tie up, and another installment would make me, at least, very happy

Well, I did feel at forty chapters I had rather taken the story to a conclusion and had other story ideas to work upon. Perhaps I might try another timestop story at some point, though there are several others I have written on Literotica already so I have rather explored my 'take' on the timestop idea. Inspiration for new ideas and variations on what a timestopper might do did become difficult. I think to suggest, as another reader did, that the story is 'just the same old thing happening in every episode' was a bit unfair as it sems to me there is quite a bit of variety. 'Circle of Time' is a TS story which I wrote later on, albeit not about the same TSer.

I thought I had tied up any loose ends but if you like to write and tell me what I have missed I shall think about adding an extra chapter to deal with those. Happy to discuss!

Max

Good ending to a terrific series. I really enjoyed this one, I thought the variety of experiences was very nice, as were the day dream asides. Very fond of the ending, with the TSM realizing that he had trespassed beyond what he thought was ethical. If you do another episode or a few, I would hope that it would be some years later, when an older timestopper, perhaps married with a kid or two, has the urge to continue his old habits but has different problems. That would be fun, but as it stands, its very good. Excellent series.