All Comments on 'Timestopper Ch. 05: Turn Back Time'

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bienclarbienclarabout 2 years ago

He had that coming — imagine being stupid enough to tell someone else about the watch.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice twist!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

DAMN, I knew that was a mistake the minute Zach showed Dave what the watch could do. It's kind of amazing how much control that small head has over the large one, ;-). I've been wondering if turning the hands back would reverse time since he discovered the watch's power. So, now Zach can reverse the time and come out to Sean before Jake's slipup. Maybe that will make a difference. Can't wait to see what happens next. Chapter #5 was another great roller coaster ride. Thanks, MLF

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So he is just like photographer girl Max (if you know what game I indicated)? How about he rewind time to the start? Flashpoint or butterfly effect?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is an amazing story! I can't wait for Chapter 6.

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