by jakebarnes33
How old are you? 13? 15?<BR>There wasn't any passion in this boring excuse for erotica.
That was a nice start to the story but you could develop it a little more and more dialogue about his infatuation with his mother prior to catching her with his girlfriend. It would be nice for second chapter if you have time
I loved it and want to read some more of their love affair.Thanks............Rich
I'd normally request a second chapter but since the author hasn't submitted anything in over 5 years, I won't bother.