by jakebarnes33
I'd normally request a second chapter but since the author hasn't submitted anything in over 5 years, I won't bother.
I loved it and want to read some more of their love affair.Thanks............Rich
That was a nice start to the story but you could develop it a little more and more dialogue about his infatuation with his mother prior to catching her with his girlfriend. It would be nice for second chapter if you have time
How old are you? 13? 15?<BR>There wasn't any passion in this boring excuse for erotica.