All Comments on 'To Be Frank Ch. 07'

clearly she is still mourning tim as she goes to college a year later and meets simon. is simon just rebound comfort, or will it be a long term thing? or will she get involved with her new girldfriend Clarissa? the ups and downs of life....

IMHO tim's death was a bit fast for this chapter, it might have been more affecting (or manipulating) if the author had recounted a romantic evening/week before the crash, so we readers would feel the impact more.

also, a few more conversations instead of summary of her mourning and last year in school might have pulled us readers in deeper.....and been an opportunity to develop some of the family characters more.

This is a great story, can't wait to read more. Incidentally, my comment on Chapter 6 about the switch of names between Frank and Kate... please ignore it, I obviously haven't been concentrating!