Interesting idea, but second person (which is what it's more commonly called - I wasn't sure what reader's POV was, although I guess it does make sense) is a really hard structure to read.
Update 10/27/22 I finally submitted part 3 of Ava's Corrupting Camping Trip, so that should be published in a few days or so. There will be a part 4, but at this point I can't promise it will be out any time soon. I hope you enjoy my stories. Feedback always welcome.