All Comments on 'To Cure a Slut'

It sucked pick a POV

What's POV? Penis outside vagina?

Loved this, hoping to see more of her

POV = point of view. It's a basic, even fundamental writing device, and concerning that you have nearing 200 stories but you dont know about it. Maybe you've heard of "1st/3rd person"? If not, do some research

Isn't a bit anal to number people in a gangbang? Or maybe I could set up a ticketing service where men get a ticket on arrival and wait for their number to be called? "No. 5 to the pussy, please. No. 5 to the pussy."

Loved it! If you decide you need editing help, let me know, but I didn't see any problems. The POV is consistent.

Alina, you've outdone yourself yet again. Fast, hotter than fuck fun.

No idea what anonymous was smoking. Ignore that asshole. This is great.

Mmm... I love that phrase: "Fast, hotter than fuck fun."

Ignore the POV people, this was excellent; well written, and very hot.

lol - I'll have to write a story about POV people.

Really fun story that left me wanting more - like a story should.