All Comments on 'To Find a Jewel Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellent narrative

Detailed, indeed sensual, and without bad grammar and misspellings that can ruin it. By all means, continue! Looking for plot, character depiction, and hot moments and phrases. You’re up to the task.

ZownsJZownsJover 3 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for reading and taking the time to compliment the story. I will move on to the next chapter. Z

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Can't wait

You stopped as I was getting wet.. can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Fantastic start it’s very very sensual, you captured the anticipation perfectly.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

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