by ZownsJ
Detailed, indeed sensual, and without bad grammar and misspellings that can ruin it. By all means, continue! Looking for plot, character depiction, and hot moments and phrases. You’re up to the task.
Thank you for reading and taking the time to compliment the story. I will move on to the next chapter. Z
You stopped as I was getting wet.. can't wait for the next chapter.
Fantastic start it’s very very sensual, you captured the anticipation perfectly.
Thanks for sharing
Tess (uk)