All Comments on 'To Have and To Hold Ch. 03'

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daydreamer26daydreamer26about 3 years ago

Great chapter, I'm glad I wasn't disappointed with the characters development. I actually listened to the song too. Bring on chapter 4. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I really hoped this wouldn't turn into 50 shades. Locking a woman in a room, when she wants you to go, is a case for police. Too bad, had high potential.

ScorpioJJScorpioJJabout 3 years ago

It is clear sexual harassment. She should call the police and have charges brought against the arrogant jerk.

fictionwriter21fictionwriter21about 3 years agoAuthor

IMPORTANT.

Dear reader, some of the content from To Have and To Hold, might be sensitive for some people. Harrasment and control will be a common subject through the first 5 chapters. As the characters evolve, so will their interactions. Just hang in there.

Thank you ❤️

GregJohnson1958GregJohnson1958about 3 years ago

Nice fan fiction of a fan fiction

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I think you just blew it. No way would a strong person like Alexandria allow this agressive sexual assault to c0ntinue. Being realistic in the stressful situation of closing down the centre do you really believe shed be in the mood for sex?

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