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anonymous_husbandanonymous_husbandover 12 years ago
Good Honest Fantasy

I like the use of second person for this kind of stuff. It's honest and organic, and it really lets the reader know that this is the stuff that turns you on. Fantastic, honest fantasy. Would like to be that stranger ;)

avideroticreaderavideroticreaderover 12 years agoAuthor

This was my first submission.....in more ways than one! Thank you for being so nice!

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