All Comments on 'To New Beginnings…'

Well, the word crafting was virtually perfect. And the blow by blow sex what explicit. But who could get excited about the lack of drama. Best belongs in the romance section, but nobody reads that. There is a reason you only have 3 followers in 8 stories, which is a pitiful tally. A good writer gets 10 followers PER story. Spice it up, get naughty.

Another reason could be 8 stories in 13 years! Hard to get excited by a new story. 3 in 2008 1 in 2009 1 in 2012 then 3 in 2021? 9 yrs since your last story. Give up if that's the best you can do. I enjoyed the story. As a 20 year vet of the USAzf I was gone a lot so I can relate to this story easily. Gone for 3-4 months is difficult. I was lucky to find a wife in the same situation. So we made the time pass. No regrets.

DragonRider55 Ret USAF

I enjoyed the story, very erotic. But I have to agree with an earlier comment about the lack of drama, I felt you could've given the characters more of a story. Other than that, it was wonderful.