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Click hereI wasn't seeing stars, but I did see what looked to be lightning in the sides of vision. The sensation in my body went from one of pure need to overstimulation. I had to reach down to pull Tricia up to me. After this slight movement, I fell back unclenching and completely spent from my orgasm.
Tricia moved to lay next to me and was humming low. She looked at me and said, "That was so fucking hot, I love the way you cum!" She grinned, kissed my cheek, and whispered in my ear, "It's exciting how explosive you feel and how good you taste." She giggled a little.
Tricia was snuggling into me, laying her head on my arm, and put her hand on my chest. I clasped her hand in mine and turned to kiss her. She was stunningly beautiful and had a soft smile of satisfaction. I kissed her deeply and gazed into her eyes wearily. I softly said, "Tonight has been wonderful."
She toyingly responded, "Well just rest up, because I'm sure we will have a great day tomorrow." Tricia moved her head to my chest, and I softly stroked her hair. As we laid there, I looked at her for a short time, thinking this was the first of many milestones in the project of our new relationship. I then drifted off into a content slumber.
I enjoyed the story, very erotic. But I have to agree with an earlier comment about the lack of drama, I felt you could've given the characters more of a story. Other than that, it was wonderful.
Another reason could be 8 stories in 13 years! Hard to get excited by a new story. 3 in 2008 1 in 2009 1 in 2012 then 3 in 2021? 9 yrs since your last story. Give up if that's the best you can do. I enjoyed the story. As a 20 year vet of the USAzf I was gone a lot so I can relate to this story easily. Gone for 3-4 months is difficult. I was lucky to find a wife in the same situation. So we made the time pass. No regrets.
DragonRider55 Ret USAF
Well, the word crafting was virtually perfect. And the blow by blow sex what explicit. But who could get excited about the lack of drama. Best belongs in the romance section, but nobody reads that. There is a reason you only have 3 followers in 8 stories, which is a pitiful tally. A good writer gets 10 followers PER story. Spice it up, get naughty.