All Comments on 'To Obtain Another's Power'

by reader8363

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mlrsdpicmmlrsdpicm10 months ago

You have a good premise, but it needed to be more concise and had so many misspelled words. The grammar needed to be better, which made it hard to read.

gem4tnagem4tna10 months ago

Needs more chapters

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