All Comments on 'To Swap Or Not To Swap Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Quick!

Gee, a little more build up would have been nice. What all happened in the hot tub? That could be a playing and stripping area.

Oh, well!

JOE

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Editing

The story was hot, but needs editing for spelling. Read your submittals carefully before posting.

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