All Comments on 'To the Citadel and Beyond Ch. 02'

more claire stuff grrr lol

I actually got angry when she was raped by the fiend! I am looking forward to seeing the reaction of the craftswomen when they reach the citadel. please do not let this story die. I will be recommending this to several of my author friends so you can get the reads and comments that you deserve.

I don't really go for Sci-Fi as it tends to be far from what I usually enjoy, but this was very creative and exotic. Great work, it would be ashame if you didn't continue with it

This is a great story. Please continue it!

Please continue the citadel threads. I enjoy them greatly!!!

There is a paddy-wagon waiting for us there ! We will be soooo happy in a nice padded cell !!!! With 1 star on the door!

One of the best series of read