All Comments on 'Toby's High School Harem Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I like this story. Can't wait to see what's happens in chapter 4

weatherman70weatherman70over 1 year ago

hurry up with more chapters

anonintexas1999anonintexas1999over 1 year ago

Wow

Fantastic.

Need more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

When do we read more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Changing from present to past tense and vise versa can be very annoying. Also, an editor would help. Otherwise you’ve have a pretty

good story going.

upyoursixupyoursixabout 1 year ago

He just skipped school without any mention? Pretty sure that would not go over at all

MarkT63MarkT6310 months ago

Wonderful fantasy, except jealousy always rears its ugly head. Felicia will be the first jealous female.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Not really a harem. Just a bunch of girls he fucks with seemingly little attachment or concern for the others while doing so. I mean he's now an escort for one woman. That's not a harem xD That's... fuck I don't know what that is, but it's not that for sure. Well whatever it is, it looks like it didn't get far as there's only 1 more episode and it uploaded in 2022. It had some potential but I guess it was abandoned.

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I am just here to share and read some stories. I am doing all this for my amusement but also to share stories I'd find interesting. I'm not a writer but I'm always writing so grammar and all that may be rough. I'm not trying to annoy anyone. I'm not going to use an editor, I t...