All Comments on 'Toby's High School Harem Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Not really a harem. Just a bunch of girls he fucks with seemingly little attachment or concern for the others while doing so. I mean he's now an escort for one woman. That's not a harem xD That's... fuck I don't know what that is, but it's not that for sure. Well whatever it is, it looks like it didn't get far as there's only 1 more episode and it uploaded in 2022. It had some potential but I guess it was abandoned.

MarkT63MarkT6310 months ago

Wonderful fantasy, except jealousy always rears its ugly head. Felicia will be the first jealous female.

upyoursixupyoursixabout 1 year ago

He just skipped school without any mention? Pretty sure that would not go over at all

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Changing from present to past tense and vise versa can be very annoying. Also, an editor would help. Otherwise you’ve have a pretty

good story going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

When do we read more?

anonintexas1999anonintexas1999over 1 year ago

Wow

Fantastic.

Need more

weatherman70weatherman70over 1 year ago

hurry up with more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I like this story. Can't wait to see what's happens in chapter 4

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I am just here to share and read some stories. I am doing all this for my amusement but also to share stories I'd find interesting. I'm not a writer but I'm always writing so grammar and all that may be rough. I'm not trying to annoy anyone. I'm not going to use an editor, I t...