All Comments on 'Together Series: Group Camping'

Why do you keep changing tense from past to present. It is quite off-putting. You are telling what happened not what is happening.

I really enjoyed this read. Entertaining and humorous, I wanted to read to the end even after I'd climaxed. :-). Great skill.

Nice set-up, solid characters, realistic dialogue: I really enjoyed this. Not often I award five stars, but this deserved a top score. Do hope we get to hear more of Sal and Eddy's adventures, maybe another with Cara?

This was great and I'd love to have this storyline develop further. It's hot already, but could really keep going. Great writing.