All Comments on 'Tokyo Symphony Ch. 05'

Mr. Robot, I must agree with asianToy. Your stories are very well written. Great sex too, The structure of Tokyo Symphony is lovely.

I've been so captivated by the characters, their feelings, situations and reactions - I've been so enthralled by the plot, artfully presented with dexterity and skill - that I failed to notice THAT ONLY 4,585 PEOPLE HAVE READ THIS!!!

What the fuck is wrong with the readers at lit.? This is prime writing here. This isn't just hot smut - which it totally is - it's a really well written story. It's way better than my story and I've got lots more views (but somewhat lower ratings- which is totally ligit), probably because I'm a girl, which is fine by me.

Seriously, this is one of the (I know this is cliché) 'best stories on the site'. I would be proud if this were my work!

asianToy