Tom & Sue & John & Debbie Ch. 23

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Both Charlotte and Beverly revealed to our little tight-knit group, the skeletons they had hidden deep inside their closets, and then there was Sis... making a startling, unforeseen move on ol' Kansas, just to remove any doubts I had about her and Tom having any type of relationship while I was being hard headed and stubborn about giving our relationship a second chance. And just like clockwork we pulled into the Ladies Athletic Dorm's parking lot, a full fifteen minutes before our curfew.

Nancy parked her 'Vette on the first row, we hustled inside the Ladies Athletic Dorm, signed in, and went straight to our room. Nancy smiled at me as we were getting ready for bed and said, "Roomie, we better hit the sack. That noisy alarm is going to start barking at 7AM so we'll have just enough time to get ready, stop by the dining hall, eat a bit, and be on time for Poly Sci." Nancy flicked off the light and within minutes she was sawing logs.

I was lying in bed, my mind wasn't wandering like it did this morning, but I was thinking how was I going to react when Tom and I finally broke the ice? Was I going to lose it like Roomie did this morning when she first saw Eddie? Or, was I going to stay my ground? Was I going to take the advice of not only Sis, Jamie, and Angie, but now Mary Ann, and give me and Tom's relationship a second chance? It was only moments later when I dozed off.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Chapter 24, please!

Please, when do you releasr chapter 24? This is so good stuf!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Please, realese a new episode. This is the best novel.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 5 years ago
Still hot

I've been following this series since the beginning, too. It's been a hot series, and I always look forward to each new chapter.

Keep on writing. I'd like to know how this story turns out. Will Sue and Tom get back together? ...and when?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Anything else?

I have been following this from the beginning. It is not a bad little series. I have a question though. Will you ever have more than straight, male on female, near monogamous sex? You have had a couple cheating scenes, and one girl did a MMF if I recall,.but that has been it.

You have hinted a couple times,.intentionally or not, at some girl on girl action. Particularly when the sisters were sharing the fiancee. And I thought there might have been an incest scene once, but that didn't play out either. I don't even recall an anal.scene or shaved women. The story is contemporary, as you mentioned a morning after pill, which is a recent development.

Just wondering if a little bit of freak may show up time to time. It's still a good story. It just seems this story could be made for such actions. Thanks for writing.

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