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All Comments on 'Tommy Exposed and Humiliated Pt. 01'

by SouthpawT

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like it but it's too short. If you're publishing so few each time, I'll wait a while to read some more in one session.

SouthpawTSouthpawTover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback.

First time writing but I’ll take it on board and make part 2 longer.

Cheers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is a fantastic beginning, make them as long or short as you like but please keep writing! Can't wait for the next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

"Tommy felt the familiar urge of the horn." Great descriptive story

SouthpawTSouthpawTabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks again for the feedback.

Hopefully have another part on in the next couple of weeks.

Cheers.

schoolmrsschoolmrsabout 2 years ago

Good start, but remember less is always more. Check out some of my offerings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Love it. Lots of potential.

maddictmaddictabout 2 years ago

What a naughty neighbor.

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