All Comments on 'Tommy Pt. 02'

I like your writing a lot But, That was a long way around the barn. I wanted to read about them together. I hope you can move the story along. I look forward to the next installment. Thanks

I'm a fan. Your writing is grammatically clean and your story pace is well thought out. Can't wait for part 3.

Yep, I'm waitng for p3 too.

Loved part 2 even more than part 1. My cock is ready to explode!! Thanks! I enjoyed it very much and long for the next part. I think she is going to get Tommy to fuck her, right?

Bob

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Another good read. o found this a little bit better than part one. That's because this time, she lets him see the very pussy he came from along with some of the dark sexy lady-fur hair that very obviously surrounds it very well. I hope you can find the time to write more similar stories in the future. Another 5 for another "realistic hairy mom" story.

A few things. It started pretty good. But when you got to the part of her getting the cum into the jar and what not it was full speed ahead. Slow down.

Also if a woman is going to wear a bikini that small let’s be honest here lose the pubes.

Lastly this whole elaboration of what she is doing for her birthday is pretty stupid. Why this ridiculous thing versus her just making a move on her son. She clearly wants it from the source.

However the writing isn’t bad so have you a 3 but was very close to a two.