All Comments on 'Tom's Parallel World Pt. 07'

by Nellymcboatface

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PrivatePervPrivatePervover 2 years ago

I love this story but is Tom going to only have casual partners? No one catches feelings or anything? I think my man Tom needs a main girl lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Outstanding storytelling, as usual. Thank you so much for this entertaining tale. There are so many different viewpoints and perspectives from the characters: this helps create an air of authenticity about the story. One more item: I'm not too concerned about Tom "catting" around (is that a racist term in this world?). Casual sex seems to be a thing in this alternate world and most seem content with it. I could go on and on, but I don't want to bore you. Thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I've only just found this story and I'm looking forward to lots more, soon as you can please.

JohnSimmsJohnSimmsover 2 years ago

Great story - intrigue, sex, parallel world politics, nanobots, possible inter-dimensional war, love, marriage, mating mermaids, catgirl bondage, mystery. oh, the life of a super sex toy... Thank you Nelly! Can't wait to see where this goes:-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really awesome update. Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm loving this story.

xtrail65xtrail65over 1 year ago

OMG….The suspense is killing me

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[12.12.22]

Excellent work on thee 'invasion' angle, brill tension!

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[Tom glanced outside to confirm the weather, to see two stout British Bulldogs unload a flatbed wagon of timber garden tables and chairs]

Does this mean that Davey Boy Smith and Dynamite Kid were there for a WWF/WWE Tables and Chairs match?

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

So vacuum cleaners are called Hoovers in this universe too! How British!

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