by BarracudaSwordfish
Superb story ! Loved it! Very well written and loved the smoking element. Wish you had expanded on the peeing scene but that is just the pervert in me! Please write more stories like this !
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. I am working on a sequel and it certainly will be more explicit in certain areas!
Loved the beginning especially when I realised what was going on. Well written and I love your style.