All Comments on 'Too Early Not to Fuck'

Yeah ummm no. 1 star.

erm dang man

"Makes me sound like a fat gangster. " I see what you did there. (IYKYK)

Loved it, too. Definitely 5⭐️.

5 Stars! Well done! Sounds like the brother is having a fantastic Christmas.

Very nicely written. The narrative of the final sex scene was terrifically erotic, yet warm and loving.

Enjoyed to hear about their fuck...amazing how him ate sisters Pussy

I love how these are developing. I'm not sure where this all ends up, but I love watching it go there.

Not often I read such a well written offering.

Nicely done!

This was my favourite part of the trio thus far. The lovemaking during the second half especially. If you want some constructive criticism, I think you used the word 'cream' one or two too many times, personally - but that's me nit-picking. Also, I love how Sal's personality shines through in every scene, every bit of dialogue. The main character, however, feels far more plain in contrast. It's a common thing when writing first-person-POV to be fair! Just something to consider for part four. I do hope there will be a part four! Easy 5-stars, as usual.

Lovely 🤗 😘

Okay you've left a nice well wrapped plot thread, "Sal beamed. "Great idea, big brother!" She took Aisha's hand and pulled her towards the door. "We'll make coffee and exchange secrets while we wait."

As she closed the door behind Aisha and herself, the look she gave me spelled trouble." Author my mischievous acquaintance, are you planning for Sal to rope in Aisha? I sure hope so but it'll still be wonderful to see more regardless

Love it

The best so far, descriptions, discriptions, discriptions.

Well. I love sister-brother stories, and this is turning into a good one. Perhaps the two girls will get toand pleasure each other and them partner together to pleasure him. I don’t know why you had to make separate posts when each of these episodes would have easily fit in one.