All Comments on 'Too Good To Be True Ch. 13'

You definitely should take an edit pass through these again to take care of the spelling and grammar issues... Probably the biggest repeating culprit is the spelling of "masturbate", you have it as "masterbate" throughout all the chapters.

Also, you reference Tamora as saying she wouldn't be at the study group, but her name was Tiffany in earlier chapters.

Good stuff

5/5

I bet when Khloe finally caves she'll end up being a freak in the sack. Letting all that pent up sexual frustration out in a massive burst. At least I hope that's how it will go.