by NaughtyPaladin
Well done series of a fantastic poly relationship with the characters. Fantastic story line that has had me hooked and reading it exclusively and glad I found it and lucked out that 27 chapters had been published when I started reading it.
This series has been a fun ride. Don't know where you go next, graduation, evolution, dissolution? Whatever you choose, I am looking forward to reading more from you.
I kinda feel bad for Mary I feel like she could be like tom’s and Courtney’s like they adopt her as their plaything or smth. Not my story but I will love which ever way it goes
I just sent the some more for this story to my editor. Once he takes a look at it, I'll get it posted.
Loved the story. Some grammar and spelling errors distracted me though and suggest to add another proof reader and to run a spell checker. Like to read masterbate instead of mastUrbate like 400 times through the whole series gets tired soon
Great read keep waiting for the plot complications to rear their ugly heads tho like an unexpected pregnancy threatens to unravel the group or speeds up the wedding or the return/revenge of her mom or he wakes up to one of the staff blowing him
Love how that consent stuff goes out the window when the women decide to manipulate Tom into fucking his sister even when he’s made it clear he doesn’t want to. When they were trying to pressure Abby into anal Tom stood up for her, but because some of the harem feel insecure about decisions they made free from coercion now they want blackmail on Tom or he loses the harem. That’s not loving polyamory that’s mutually assured destruction.