All Comments on 'Too Tempting'

Moved from the 1st person to the 3rd person. Very annoying.

An outrageously fun piece. Poor Tyler.

I thought it was a bit vengeful and wrong what your character did. I had to laugh at the comment about 1st person to third person writing. They must just read these to annoy themselves and feel good berating amateurs.

Keep writing.

Oh noooooo. Poor Tyler. He's screwed. Short and funny.

Interesting closure.