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ariesgirl about 11 years ago

I'm confused, why exactly they can't be with each other?

Anonymousabout 11 years ago

???,Is there another chapter??

It started out good,then got confusing.Is there more to this or is ths it??It does not explain the WHY of the title,surely there is more to it.

FallenTreasure about 11 years agoAuthor

First of many :)

Hi guys, yes this is only the first chapter and the second was uploaded last night that will hopefully answer some of your questions :)

Anonymousover 10 years ago

Sorry but this was just too confusing to be bothered trying to read the rest. 1*

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