All Comments on 'Tormented by My Muse (750 words)'

Well crafted! And I caught the allusion to Worcestershire sauce, or at least some of the ingredients, however calling a muse barren is dangerous. The last words you hear from her is "You think THIS is barren? HOLD MY BEER." That's when all your plot bunnies die. Thank you for the smile.

Every part of this is hilarious. Second funniest story I’ve read here (after Living in a Woman’s World). Please share the anchovies and the fish sauce.

I loved this... and here I thought my Muse was a raging bitch, hahahaha!

Five stars from me, fantastic story in such a short wordcount.

Am afraid that I only caught the Poe and Gibson allusions. Chemo brain sux.

That's bloody brilliant 😂

"Are you writing stories or making fish sauce?"

LOL I'm dying here, this is great.

This was fun. Where did she get the lube, though?

Loved it! Especially love how "all you produce is spank material" was incorporated into her 'subject's' degradation.

I hate the restrictiveness of 750 challenges, but I liked what you did here.

Definitely not the sweet BDSM that I'm used to from you, but I enjoyed it, just the same. 5 stars from me

You have a way with words. It made me smile.

This is hilarious and VERY well-written!

"I shuddered, recalling the nightmarish fever dreams that passed for erotica in some parts of the internet." Haha!

5 Stars and a favorite! Loved the humor. And I'm thinking we might have the same muse!