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blastwizardblastwizardabout 11 years ago
Ok, someone needs to help these two out. LOL

What is the reason they can't be together? We need an intergalactic love doctor. LOL I like this story, but I am feeling bad for these two right about now. Besides hot together, tell us the rest. I feel a soap opera movie voice coming on..."Will love conquer all?" I am looking forward to whatever your characters have to tell us. Seem like something not so nice is happening in their reality and being in love complicates EVERYTHING. HA! Happy Valentines Day!!!

ariesgirlariesgirlabout 11 years ago

I have been wondering the same thing since chapter 1. This chapter didn't give any kind of clues as to why.

FallenTreasureFallenTreasureabout 11 years agoAuthor
Answers are coming

Everything will be explained soon but I want the explanation to come naturally to the story rather than just the characters talking among themselves. Thank you for reading and I promise answers are coming soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

This sounds like Hancock.... Hope its different from that storyline... Liked it though.

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