All Comments on 'Tormented on the Road'

Nice premise.

Well paced.

But why didn't she play with her own tits during the tease?

And why didn't she describe how her pussy felt? Freshly shaved?

And why didn't she have him smell the panties she'd removed in the bathroom?

And why didn't she 'notice' the wet spot on his crotch from leaking precum?

And why didn't she describe what she was going to do to him -- in detail -- when they got to the campsite?

Four stars.

Very good story. She does a good job building up the tension.

My wife on our first date went to the restroom and when she returned she subtly dropped her panties in front of me at the dinner table when there were other diners present.

A good touch would have been for her to unzip his pants, pull out his hard cock and make him drive with his cock out and have her describe it throbbing as she runs her toy all over her pussy.