All Comments on 'Touch Me Daddy Ch. 03'

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budman28budman28about 20 years ago
great story

A well written story. You did a great job misskittyclitty.

mcholdrguymcholdrguyabout 20 years ago
Another great tale!!

Certain "special" daddies dream of just this scene. Thanks!

Mystic_UnicornMystic_Unicornabout 20 years ago
Loved this story

Each chapter better than the one before....I LOVED this story.

Very erotic style of writing you have.

All I can say is more...more...more please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wonderful Daughter

this is a great series, and I loved the roommate being involved in the action. I hope the author can continue this series. Allowing the daughter to find a guy who would end up being involved with the roommate and the father. Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
damm woman you write hot

this series is good as it explores the depths of her awakening ... I disagree with others ... no need to bring another man into it

maybe lisa's mom can becoem the third woman in his life and

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm so HOT!

Just love this series very sexy erotic &

HOT HOT HOT keep wrting more more more

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

and

THANK YOU:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
A girl shouldn't share her daddy

I loved the first installment of this series but was not thrilled with this one. There was some hot sex and I loved the daughter explaining her girl-on-girl experience that turned her and Daddy on. But I didn't like her sharing her precious daddy with another girl. I know I wouldn't share mine (though we love to be watched)!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wow

i came about 5 times

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Each writing gets better!

What a talent you have! I hope you continue to write!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

how big are Julies breasts?

Joshuad2477sJoshuad2477sabout 5 years ago
Typical

Sorry but you lose points for having the standard lesbian college roommate aspect of the story. At least you didn't have her fucking other guys and the dad finding it hot watching her or just the idea of her getting fucked by other guys hot.

lampilotlampilotabout 4 years ago

The sex itself in your stories is pretty well-done, but there are a lot of missed opportunities to spice things up. In this one, for example, there is virtually no attention paid to Lisa's reaction to the whole thing. She finds out the roommate she seduced is fucking her own father, then joins in with them, but nothing at all is written about how she feels about it? I'd say that's pretty important for a good story, especially one in the third-person.

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